animesh kumar

Running water never grows stale. Keep flowing!

You said, it would be over

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You said, it would be over
time will stay for a while
keeping a check until
Shadows’ shower

My pen was held back
perhaps for a glitter in the sky
or perhaps for a free, really free butterfly
And when it did
Fly in the sky
The ink had stained the shirt
wasted over trivial effort

Is it time to
move, or is it a sign to
hold on to?

My animals strut forward, fast
so damn fast
As if scared of the past
flutter of dust behind my cart wheel
rising on imminent nostalgia, then
falling apart like it is end of Halloween.

You said, it would be over
And when it did make sure, you said,
you are bathed and clean, under
Shadow’s shower.

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Written by Animesh

July 28, 2009 at 1:06 am

Posted in Poetry

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4 Responses

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  1. very nice sir 🙂

    ashish sahu

    July 28, 2009 at 1:18 am

  2. I liked the intro because of its rhythm, and also the transition from one character to another in the poem

    Navneet

    July 28, 2009 at 4:10 am

  3. its beautiful

    ...........

    August 3, 2009 at 1:25 pm

  4. Hi Animesh, I visited the site after a pretty long time and read this excellent piece from you. i just wonder what it takes from you to create such excellent stuff… 🙂

    Swapnil Padhye

    September 1, 2009 at 6:13 am


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